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Jelly V.I.P
Posts : 123 Age : 29 Location : Niagara Falls
| Subject: Los Santos Vagos-Leader Application Tue Feb 19, 2013 6:50 pm | |
| IC QuestionsCharacter Name:Ramiero Character Age:27 How does your character look: Biege Khakis(khaki pants),big white tank top,shorted boxed beard,white sneakers,shaved head,yellow bandana.
Tell something you know about this gang:
Los Santos Vagos is a Hispanic street gang and was formed back in the 70's along with other street gangs in Los Santos. Begining of the 90's Vagos and there leaders Big Poppa and Freddy turned stronger and took over bigger parts of the northern block of East Los Santos. As the Vagos expanded there territory the members where growing. Suddenly the Los Santos Vagos was on of the biggest Mexican/Latin gangs in Los Santos along with Varios Los Aztecas. But still was the Los Santos Vagos output inconvenient unsecure. Living along beside the Ballas terriorty the Vagos always was threated. The Vagos has a long history with numerous fights against the Aztecas and also been in clashes with the Grove Street Families and the Ballas.
Your background story:
Ramiero Luigi Sanchez was born in Reynosa Mexico. He grew up with his mother Carlina,his father Victor and his older sister Felicía. His family was struggeling to make a living after the father in the family was brutally murdered. When they had the chance they fled to America, where Ramieros uncle was living. Ramiero came to Los Flores as a teenager by the age of 15. Ramieros uncle Estaban was a high ranked member of the Vagos family, a so called "Experto". One day Estaban introduced Rameiro to the family and he started to work with them and suddenly he became usefull. They made him do lots of the shit jobs. But it paid of as he gained his respect within the family. On Ramieros 17th birthday he official became a member of the family. That was a big honor. Because no one that young had never joined the family in such early stage. A proof the he had talent. As Ramiero was getting older he started to do more and more important jobs. He was starting to get known around in the barrio. On a important mission where the main goal was to murder the leader of Varios Los Aztecas something went completly wrong and the leaders along with Estaban was killed. This was the last drop for Ramieros sister and mother. They moved back to Mexico. Ramiero had no choice then stay. He could not leave now,the Aztecas would destroy the family. The Vagos family was getting smaller and smaller, they where begging for a new leader. Ramiero and the few loyal members that was left managed to defend several attacks from the Aztecas. But high ranked members was killed. Ramiero was now of the oldest members alive. And by the age of 27 he is ready to take over the new role as the leader of Los Santos Vagos OOC QuestionsWhat is your in-game name:Ramiero What is your real life age:16 In what time zone you live(GMT+3, GMT-1, ect..): GMT +1 List the previous factions that you been in on this server: None. But i have experience leading families. What faction do you want to lead: Los Santos Vagos Why do you want to lead this faction: This Family needs a leader and i love roleplaying in hispanic gangs. And also the reputation of Hispanic gangs needs to grow List the members you have so far:None Can you be a good and active leader: Im playing on the server almost every day. Did you read the gang leadership rules and do you agree with them: Yes Roleplay Related QuestionsExplain the term PG: Powergaming. Acting like you have powers,abusing them in roleplay. Example: /me Takes up a sword from his pocket, tucks it into *** nose and kills him
Explain the term MG: Metagaming- Using OOC information ICly. Example: Sending PM /pm HEY! Tell me your location!
Give an example of a good /me command: /me extends his arms,reaching into his back pocket and picks up a back of cigarettes.
In what cases /do command should be used(give 1-2 examples): When trying to explain whats in a container. Or what your character is wearing Give yourself a grade of your RP Skill from 1 till 10: 8/10
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DoughBoy Veteran
Posts : 908 Age : 26
| Subject: Re: Los Santos Vagos-Leader Application Tue Feb 19, 2013 6:56 pm | |
| Well... No explain/not good enough explain of PG. No explain/not good enough explain of MG. Your grammar and English isn't enough for leading a faction,and you're new to the server. No newbie on server gets accepted as gang leader like this.
-1. Sorry,but that's how it is. Why don't you stick around the server and get know the community and in reverse..? Especially,you have to work on Hispanic RolePlay if you're trying to RolePlay Hispanic.
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Compton/Kollay WCL Founder
Posts : 3340 Location : Los Santos
| Subject: Re: Los Santos Vagos-Leader Application Tue Feb 19, 2013 11:27 pm | |
| You didn't read the gang leader apply rules, and the apply doesn't look great.
But I will stay neutral, I prefer to judge people more by their IG RP and activity and not apply. Application is on the last place for me | |
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Buhinc Golden Poster
Posts : 1583
| Subject: Re: Los Santos Vagos-Leader Application Tue Feb 19, 2013 11:33 pm | |
| - Compton wrote:
- You didn't read the gang leader apply rules, and the apply doesn't look great.
But I will stay neutral, I prefer to judge people more by their IG RP and activity and not apply. Application is on the last place for me Yeah but with application they still shows how much effort are they ready to put in gang, application count too but it's on last place at me too. So I will stay Neutral for now, I already saw you IG and your RP too, it's not bad but change your skin to Vagos and try to get few members... get me IG few more times to do some RP and than I will vote, oh and post some pictures of your RP here, maybe add some ranks structure and rules | |
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Jelly V.I.P
Posts : 123 Age : 29 Location : Niagara Falls
| Subject: Re: Los Santos Vagos-Leader Application Wed Feb 20, 2013 4:05 pm | |
| Thanks for the comments, i appreciate it. | |
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Jelly V.I.P
Posts : 123 Age : 29 Location : Niagara Falls
| Subject: Getting a new tatto. Norbit is the artist behind it. Firme' RP Wed Feb 20, 2013 4:59 pm | |
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Compton/Kollay WCL Founder
Posts : 3340 Location : Los Santos
| Subject: Re: Los Santos Vagos-Leader Application Wed Feb 20, 2013 9:15 pm | |
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Slick Senior
Posts : 554
| Subject: Re: Los Santos Vagos-Leader Application Wed Feb 20, 2013 10:29 pm | |
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Goldie_Loc Hitman
Posts : 255 Location : Ganton
| Subject: Re: Los Santos Vagos-Leader Application Thu Feb 21, 2013 3:10 am | |
| Keep it up, I will support it! | |
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Jelly V.I.P
Posts : 123 Age : 29 Location : Niagara Falls
| Subject: Re: Los Santos Vagos-Leader Application Thu Feb 21, 2013 7:54 pm | |
| †El Normas(Rules) ‡‡‡IC‡‡‡ · Respect every single member in the family. ·Listen and Learn from the high ranked vatos. ·Be loyal. · Do not fear the enemy but dont misjudge them,never enter enemy territory on your own. ·Joining the familiy-Blood In Blood Out. ·Respect our Allies as you respect your own family. · Always be strapped to protect your barrio and your ese's
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·Stay active on server. ·Dont ask for rank promotion,you will have to earn it by roleplaying and staying active IG. ·Read the rules. ·Respect the Admins and server staff. ·If you wish to become member of the Vagos family then roleplay with us In-Game to show your skills. ·Follow the RP rules. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ♚ ✞Clasificaíon✞ Guia [V]Ramiero
Mano Derecha [V]Compton
Experto [V]Vacant Fiel [V]Vacant Teniente [V]Vacant Soldados [V]Vacant Ruidos [V]Vacant Newcomer [V]Vacant
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Buhinc Golden Poster
Posts : 1583
| Subject: Re: Los Santos Vagos-Leader Application Thu Feb 21, 2013 9:26 pm | |
| Changing my vote to +1, I see you put effort into application, stay loyal and active | |
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Micklo Legend
Posts : 995 Age : 26
| Subject: Re: Los Santos Vagos-Leader Application Fri Feb 22, 2013 11:16 am | |
| Work on the background story more. | |
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Jelly V.I.P
Posts : 123 Age : 29 Location : Niagara Falls
| Subject: Re: Los Santos Vagos-Leader Application Fri Feb 22, 2013 2:14 pm | |
| - Micklo wrote:
- Work on the background story more.
Topic and Story Updated. | |
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Jelly V.I.P
Posts : 123 Age : 29 Location : Niagara Falls
| Subject: Re: Los Santos Vagos-Leader Application Fri Feb 22, 2013 6:34 pm | |
| Palabras✞ ♚
Hola=Hey Que Tal?=Whats happening(How are you?) Vale=Okey Como te llamas?=Whats your name? Cuantos años tiene?=How old are you? De donde eres?=Where are you? Hasta Luego=See you later Para mi?=To me? Para ti=For you Pejendo=Asshole Idiota=Idiot Cabron=Fucker Puta=Whore Cono=Pussy Callate=Shut up Mierda=Shit Ese=Friend/Man/Buddie/Dude Amigo=Friend Hombre=Man Chica=Girl Vamos=Lets go Chico=Boy Bien=Good Mal=Bad Loco=Mad/Crazy Nada=Nothing Barrio=Hood/Block Jefe=Leader Tranquillo=Chill Cholo=Gangster Pistola=Gun/Pistol Droga=Drug Atacar=Attack Proteger=Protect Casa=Home/House Remojar=Gather
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Jelly V.I.P
Posts : 123 Age : 29 Location : Niagara Falls
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Гость Guest
| Subject: Re: Los Santos Vagos-Leader Application Sat Feb 23, 2013 9:47 am | |
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DoughBoy Veteran
Posts : 908 Age : 26
| Subject: Re: Los Santos Vagos-Leader Application Sat Feb 23, 2013 10:19 am | |
| Hmmmmmmm..I see you're active. I'm changing my -1 to NEUTRAL. I see you made some progress by now.
There are some mistakes in your slang and your character's appearence. Don't put period or dot(.) between the clothes when you're counting them. You did like this:"......Beige Khakis.Big White T-shirt..." Do it like this:"...beige khakis(khaki pants),white tank top(it's not t-shirt it's tank lol)...". And your slang has some mistakes.
-Vamos=C'mon.(not "Let's go") -Ese=Man(not "friend") -Hombre=friend/pal(not "man" lol) -Callate/Callate la boca=Shut up/Shut the fuck up(it's kinda better than "callar")
One more tip:Always use correct English grammar in your Roleplay that is /mes and /dos.Always put period/dot(.) at the end of sentence.Always begin your sentence in IC chat with capital big letter and end it with a period(.) or question mark(?) or exclamanation(!).It always depends on the sentence's meaning. Example: "Q-vo,vato?" "Chinga tu madre,pinche mamon!" "That's some chingon carrucha,holmes." | |
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Jelly V.I.P
Posts : 123 Age : 29 Location : Niagara Falls
| Subject: Re: Los Santos Vagos-Leader Application Sat Feb 23, 2013 10:33 am | |
| Thank you. Appreciete it. Hombre means man.Check it up. Vamos=We walk(lets go, C'mon) | |
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Jelly V.I.P
Posts : 123 Age : 29 Location : Niagara Falls
| Subject: Re: Los Santos Vagos-Leader Application Sat Feb 23, 2013 2:44 pm | |
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Compton/Kollay WCL Founder
Posts : 3340 Location : Los Santos
| Subject: Re: Los Santos Vagos-Leader Application Sun Feb 24, 2013 6:32 pm | |
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Micklo Legend
Posts : 995 Age : 26
| Subject: Re: Los Santos Vagos-Leader Application Mon Feb 25, 2013 10:48 am | |
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Jelly V.I.P
Posts : 123 Age : 29 Location : Niagara Falls
| Subject: Re: Los Santos Vagos-Leader Application Mon Feb 25, 2013 10:53 am | |
| Appreciate it Micklo! I will check the tutorial once again. | |
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Jelly V.I.P
Posts : 123 Age : 29 Location : Niagara Falls
| Subject: Re: Los Santos Vagos-Leader Application Mon Feb 25, 2013 1:21 pm | |
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Compton/Kollay WCL Founder
Posts : 3340 Location : Los Santos
| Subject: Re: Los Santos Vagos-Leader Application Mon Feb 25, 2013 1:22 pm | |
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stalkur Moderator
Posts : 1102
| Subject: Re: Los Santos Vagos-Leader Application Mon Feb 25, 2013 3:37 pm | |
| Active enough, your RP seems good, so you have my vote. | |
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