Not bad.
But you should've showed DP and MC, you didn't show them again.
Well, you showed them through the skin selection, but you should've chosen MC skin for example and show the clubhouse, the bikes and garage.
And take DP skin and tell in the video they're a crew that sell drugs for money, some have their own corners and the new dealers work at corners, etc.
But nice thought and video overall.
And next time also show the car dealers, I bet that'll atleast atract 1 person.
Would also be better if you asked if people could help you with the video-..