MC Mista' Dan - HipHop [please read, its kinda OOC]

this is kinda OOC rap so read this and give some feedback and shit, im considering to start rapping IRL but im not sure, i dont wanna sound like og loc lol xD



[verse 1]
In style of a street artist
My way of acting is still fantastic
blastin is what i do, fuck the askin
HipHop made me, is that so disgusting?
Writting rhymes is what i do, even when ill be in a coffin
When im walkin, they see me beatboxin,
grim the ripper is knockin, but im neva stoppin
i neva change, fifty bucks in the pocket
all i got rhymes that i throw like space rockets
deep in the space, thats where my poetry goes
among the legends of the history, cuz i aint rappin for hoes
does the money flows? Couldnt care less
I love makin a mess, i view life is party of chess
they see me standin alone on the corner but im not
I got someone always with me, she's called HipHop
my first love, it was love on first sight
Cause she was always with me when i was in fight
ridin thru night with the homies with rap on my mind
That girl called hip to the hop raised up my pride

[verse 2]
As i kid, i seen my parents in argue
I grew up into man, i got balls to say fuck you
even to the president
cause fuck this shit im not just resident
i got homies on my back
rhymes that make niggaz collapse
graffiti on the wall that are real blast
4 elements, im the fifth
And i aint even a bitch, neva been
my life aint that pointless,
even though i aint rich like charlie sheen
fuck the fake rappers, rappin for dough
im rappin from my hearth, thats where real lyrics come from
My homie hyper throwin scratches high as fuck
I grew up in fucked up part of town so dont try my luck
duck or die, get down or kiss the sky
motto of my miserable life, full of violence made by .45
when im reloading my gun, i know who keeps my soul
hip hop 24/7 cause she is always with me when i roll

((You want to rap about things which is not a part of your life, like bangin etc..))

TECHNIQUE! wrote:

((You want to rap about things which is not a part of your life, like bangin etc..))

I didnt said "bangin" did i? I only mentioned a gun once, i didnt said nothing related to gangsta life

and by "blasting" i ment blasting rhymes...

Your good enough, one of the best rappers in WCL-History, you should do it, good luck.

My brother is rapping IRL in sweden also , he is like only known around umea (( a location in sweden )) he doing songs on english and swedish. But now, if you wanna be a rapper , you really wanna be a rapper , then do it. That's what my brother did and now he is almost known in whole umea, what i trying to tell you is , follow your heart of what you actually want , no drama shit , i mean , make your own songs and perhaps you will be known around your quarter. You know ?

Just wanted to tell this , of course you can find his music on youtube his '' artist '' name is Maketo. Well all I can say by now , good luck with your rapping. ))

Edit , since few others links comes up on youtube with the name of Maketo , try search '' Maketo En Saga '' its a swedish song , but i think you would find a english one if you just click on it XD.))

Why not get a Mic?
the lyrics are good thought.

Gotta say, man, these lyrics are up to par. Great stuff.

Always remember: If rapping doesn't work out, you've got a future in ghost writing. Plenty of niches for someone such as yourself in Hip Hop.

Yea Danny boii,i like your lyrics so much man.all of 'em was good Dan but i liked one line of your lyrics more than other lines .''my life aint that pointless,
even though i aint rich like charlie sheen
fuck the fake rappers, rappin for dough
im rappin from my hearth, thats where real lyrics come from''