Hepburn Heights Crew

Will stay neutral on this for now, will have to see your effort.

Lil_Familie wrote:

Will stay neutral on this for now, will have to see your effort.

I'll do my best.

Looks good, i'll be waiting for screenshots and some game activity.

/goodluck

You know we RP in 2017 right?
On topic: neutral till I see RP.
Goodluck

Couple harmless mistakes I saw

2nd paragraph. you missed a "t" in the sentence where Donald's friend was getting high on his own product (snored instead of snorTed)

And another one was, with the MC. It's Ashen Legion MC instead of Slayermen MC.

Other than that, I'm looking forward to see your effort.

maintain activity, roleplay at all times and take as many screenshots as possible and you should be fine.

good luck.

I like your screenshots Dope, keep it up like that!

Not to sound like an ass but I'ma little bit disappointed.
First of all your 39 year old chatacter, easily changable but I doubt you considered a 39 year old wouldn't act like a teenager. I'm fine with him being older it's just odd. Most street gang members don't make it after 21 so I'd like to know more was he in jail? how did he get control? I like the part about him being from a diffrent state but I think it's too easy to just give him control how about show efforot of how you take your hoods back. Also cocaine addict since the age of 13? doubt he'll live to be over 25.
The RP overall is disappointing to me, it's very simplfied and reflects poorly on you. If these things will not be changed and your story will not be fact checked with some reality I'll find it difficult to upvote this, regardless of how much I want all factions to be active

nightmare wrote:

I did not know Ice Cube and The Game were known members of the Hepburn Heights Crew.

The signature was made that way by Lil_Familie's old GFX Corner,stop bitching and hating. Years passed. Get a grip. Don't think you are something better than the rest of the community.

@DaParasite

Trying my best,like it or not,that's all i can do. I couldn't think more to do the story,but i can still think of something icly,how i still live,it's not 100% said i should post that everything on once,i guess? I'll think of something,and add it to the story if needed. Thanks for the headsup.

These screenshots are nice, but I prefer looking at unedited screenshots in a leader application (*). You could add a spoiler at the end of your post that contains the unedited screens.

(*) when others are involved in the roleplay, not so much when you're alone.

Yepperson wrote:

These screenshots are nice, but I prefer looking at unedited screenshots in a leader application (*). You could add a spoiler at the end of your post that contains the unedited screens.

(*) when others are involved in the roleplay, not so much when you're alone.

Well i usually always delete the original ones after i edit them,but i edit them with the same text from the same things happening ICly.
But alrighty,i will upload them nonedited from now on : )

I like that you're trying with the resources you currently have. Roleplaying alone is not an easy task, however it's necessary for a leader. Try to create somewhat more complex RPs IF alone. I do like the effort, and I also have to commend you for the RP we had while I was on my MC account. It's good that even though while I was outnumbered, you, as a leader of a drug cartel, didn't risk getting into a useless street fight which could lead to you getting arrested, hindering your organization.
You have improved in every category ever since I last RPed with you(on previous WCL versions), and that's a big plus already. I'm willing to give you a chance if you improve your maturity. As a leader you have to be impartial. Friends or enemies, they are all equal to you as a faction leader. Also if you could keep /b on a minimum, that'd be even more perfect.
If you can work on all of these, you have a +1 from me.

@stalkur

Thank you for the chance,i won't let you down. : )

Looks good, DopeDod