Buhinc's Application for DP

Golden Poster Posts : 1583

STORY

Omar Brooks was born on 12th April 1979 in Los Santos General Hospital. At 7 years he went to the first class at primary school in Little Mexico, he was walking into school along with his 3 years younger cousin Avon Brooks. After they grow up a little they noticed what kind of things are going on around them, prostitution, scamming, robbing, thiefs, and drug dealers. With time they meet more and more people, most of them were earning money with selling drugs, some of them were selling even weapons. They started to smoke weed, and they was missing in the school almost everyday. At 7th grade they left the school and started hanging with the people between the projects in Marina, because it was more interesting then school, after few months they started to deal low amount of drugs for some money income.Between those Marina Projects were a lot drug addicted people so selling drugs wasn't problem with time they were buying bigger amount of drugs and keep selling them for years.
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Year 2014 they already collect a lot of money they started looking for more loyal workers, so they was cruising around Los Santos, usually they were hanging at Black Markets, setting up corners for selling stuff, examining areas and so on...
One day at Verdant Bluffs they met two girls named Jess and Scarlet, they were pretty drunk so Avon and Omar asked if they are lack of company and offered them to drink together between Marina Projects and girls agreed, Girls was affiliated to Lanza Project Families, after that night they met few more times and they became good friends, sure with time they spoke about gangs and their connections, So Omar requested to meet Lanza leader - Marcus Deleon.
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Meeting

After two days girls mentioned that Omar and Avon want to meet him, and he really came to the Marina Projects, but his behavior was unacceptable so he left the spot. Avon, Omar and girls stayed between projects talking about different things. After few hours they noticed Blue Tahoma scoping them from across the street, but they wasn't expecting nothing, after few minutes shots was fired towards Omar,Avon, girls and other people there, in the shootout a guy named Chuck died. They noticed two masked persons one dressed in purple and another guy was probably Marcus.

New era

In the same day LSPD arrested Marcus Deleon and jailed him for life without possibility of parole so other guy take over Lanza Project Families... So Avon and Omar noticed that Marcus didn't care even for his members and attacked his own people that gave Jess and Scarlet proper reason to leave Lanza and join to Avon and Omar at theirs future plans.

Settling relationships

After days Omar received call from Herb leader of Temple Drive Ballas, first he said to meet Omar at Unity Station to buy the stuff. After Omar wanted to meet with him Avon warned Omar that it might be a trap, so Omar sent a message to Herb that he can't reach the location at the moment and if they want to get the stuff they should reach Marina projects, so that really happened, Herb and two other people one from Lanza and another one from Temple Balla set came to the Marina Projects armed, Omar was there with Avon and Izzy, and Omar requested that only one should come to them and speak about the problem they have, so Herb stepped closer to Omar and told that Izzy started conflict in Temple, so Herb requested fight with Izzy, in the time that Omar allowed the fight one versus one, girls just arrived at the location. Omar firstly thought that it's a trap, but after Herb pulled out a gun and aimed towards Izzy girls protected Izzy and executed Herb with no mercy, then his member, and they chased Lanza guy. After one minute of chasing Avon shot him in the back, and after that Jess,Scarlet and Avon emptied the magazines on him. So Lanza and Temple Ballas attacking and searching for responsible people at Marina.

Legal Business

But war didn't stopped cousins from purchase of Pig Pen night Club located in Northern East Los Santos, they already bought club equipment, and made made opening party...

(I wrote story based on what happened ICLY I suck in writing stories but I hope you will like it)

Members:

-Radman
-Katie
-Kimberly
-Sosa
-LilJonathan
-Jefferson
-Streetz
-Compton
-Glenn

Concept:
I'm thinking to make this faction active this is main thing, how I will reach that? With proper roleplay I will try with some drug dealing, and other illegal things, and Legal businesses.

Other:
Well that's all I don't have any skills in photoshop so topic looking isn't the best, Roleplay pictures will be posted here tomorrow and ranking will be constructed soon also (If it's even necessary to have ranking here) + I think I will start working on better drug system script slowly but proper script need a lot of time, thanks for comments, votes, critics, supports and so on Wink

+ IG I'm rping with other fake name, any MG will result in punishment.[/color][/font]

Veteran Posts : 991 Age : 25 Location : love a rainy night

Count me in also, Glenn, tomorrow I will be more active on my alt.

Gangsta Posts : 160

BIG support.

Legend Posts : 995 Age : 26

Change your name, man. Hahhaha.
Omar Barksdale, those are two names from the tv show The Wire.

Omar Little, the robbing dude. And Avon Barksdale/D'Angelo Barksdale.
No famous names, no names from tv shows or movies. That goes for whoever is Avon too.

Server Developer Posts : 618

Since I am a member, I can't vote. However, you have my support.

I am not leaving with just a reply. Here are some screenshots of my RP as a DP outsider.
What I really like is the way I can RP my own crazy character:

Note: I am continuously talking to myself and notice on the end I am acting the opposite of my character in the beginning. I am RP'ing a crazy ass fool with an alter ego. One is more secure of himself and the other ego is afraid of everything.

screenshots RP:

WCL Founder Posts : 3340 Location : Los Santos

23.03.14 RP:

Good luck, the faction looks good in-game so far.

Golden Poster Posts : 1583

Micklo I will change the lastname I like the names Wink

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Known Player Posts : 138 Age : 28

Big Support,I know you can take it far Smile

Golden Poster Posts : 1583

Thank you, changed last name and added Glenn to members Will post RP screens tomorrow, expecting same thing from members Wink

Senior Posts : 564 Age : 27

I'll give you my vote once you and your members post screen-shots of your daily Role-plays, and I have to see your commitment towards this.

Subject: Re: Buhinc's Application for DP Mon Mar 24, 2014 10:19 am

maybe ill join if im able to fix my gta sa..

Newbie Posts : 3

I've been RPing with you for two days and since I've checked players reply's so I can't vote for you, however you got my support in this, and good luck.