Keelo - Songs i wrote ( Real Life Song. ) -UPDATED

Hey everyone.
I choosed to share with y'all some of the song i wrote In Real-Life.
Just wrote what you think,even if it a bad comment,i'll take it as constructive comment.
Atleast,if you don't life my song,tell me why,just don't post ''You Suck'',thanks.
I'll update this topic almost everyday so stay tuned if you like this.
Have fun !


Keelo - Don't Give Up

( Chorus is still W.I.P ; Verse 1 start at 0:27
Verse 1 :

Yeah the life's hard but don't give up
Don't worry,one day you'll reach the top.
Man,be happy and don't be sad inside
Enjoy the lil' things and check on the Sunny side
Hard things hited me but i gotta be strong
But i ain't always happy,don't be wrong
But i ain't always down fo' discussion
So i just makeup my emotion
Sometime life's just like a rainy day
But don't give up,you'll find good way.
Yeah we do wrong things and we make bad choice
All you gotta do is listen yo' wee small voice
Keep it real,inside you shinnin' like the sun
No matter what you could have done.
Peoples blamin' you and talkin' shit 'bout you
But we don't give a F**k 'cause you know this ain't true.
Don't give up 'cause the sun will shine up one day
Believe me,don't forget that one day everything's gona be okay.


Keelo - New World Order

( Verse 1 start at 0:11 )

Verse 1 :
They wanna get petrol so they gona take over Irak
Obama said he would change shit,wha'chu waitin' for Barack ?!
9/11 2001,Projects blowed up but they blaimed Al Quaida
It was just a poor excuse for take the petrol from the Gaza
Wanna hear lot of bullshit,than turn on yo' television
''Yes We Can'' lies and hides the truth to the nation.
This ain't no T.V show,you can't just turn Off the switch
Africans dyin' from starvation and AIDS while the Govt. gettin' rich
People's scared from the truth,that why they livin' in the silence
Some are tired,riot and manifestation,this all end up in violence.
It the new world order but i say F**k those secret society
I choosed my side a long time a go,i'm down with them Killuminati
Canada ain't no better,corrupted Prime Minister
Motherfucker is likin' Obama's ass,hell yeah Mr.Harper !
Buyin'F-15,man,don't talk 'bout this economic crisis
This shit is poppin' up peoples brain cells like they abusin' pills
Tryna controll everythings,they eliminatin' any potential rebel too
They wan't me to shut the F**k up 'cause what i'm sayin' is true.
Treatin' my whole communauty like they're criminals
Juvenil paranoiak,peoples livin' as street vendals
Govt. treathin' Ghetto like shit but who's the real devil ?
We ain't no preachers but atleast we ain't feedin' off the evil




STILL WORKING ON THE FIRST 2 SONGS,MORE WILL COME

This reminded me on Dont Worry Be Happy song lol

good job

Nice ... be continue

Keep it up

cool man


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Dunno what everyone thinks..

but man you got talent! I loved the lyrics.. good one man, keep up!!! and dont give up

Thanks to everyone for showing support,it realy appreaciated !

-Topic Updated,I added ''New World Order'',hope you like it.

-Keelo

You will be the new 2pac

New World Order
Dopest one. <3

You only write lyrics or you sing those songs?

nais!
Iced out, keep it up ))